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[Stages in Animation | Pen & Ink: Sketches Ep. 3]

What about the part where you discover a feature in the animation program that would have saved you like three hours of work if you had known about it before

It's happened twice now

[Fighting Depression]

I actually really like surreal stuff, and i think the direction was sorta fine. A few things that would have REALLY helped. Other than the art, which I hope/assume that's something you're just gonna get better at or maybe you don't have the resources to digitally produce it well, the sound was a big issue. The stock music fit well, but you could have done without a lot of the sound effects, like the 'Awwww' because it took me out of it. Look into audio mixing as well. Put the sound effects/music into something like audacity and mess with the levels so that it's not too shrill and so that it sounds nice.

[DisCourt-Minion]

Wasn't bad. There's a few things i'd suggest though. I felt like you could have pushed the music and sound design further, so it felt less like i was listening to a speech and more like a dramatic monologue.

Also, the point where you added that sad violin bit was a bit jarring, considering most of the music, from what I could tell, was wholly original, unlike that bit with the violin. To be honest, I wasn't laughing for most of it, but some jokes were pretty solid, like the lizard's scream, and the arm falling off at the end.

Cool stuff dude, I'll check out the next thing when it comes out.